The Dangers of Reality TV
In my easy I will explain why television reality shows reinforces allot of unsafe messages, and the dangers of these shows affect our everyday life. These television shows affect society in sometimes a negative way, however most of these shows also promote a lot of “competition and the value of image over ability and also the obsolescence of education,” many reality television shows have come and gone, as a child growing up in this ERA most of these shows sends out the significance of competition, why I say that is the fact that shows try to educate you as if you was a toddler, there was one on television called the Flavor of Love. Now this show has a group of girls are in a mansion with only one man and these girls would try or do anything to stab the other in their back with a lot of disrespect to go along with. All these girls are competing to win the man’s heart and also trying to be famous with riches, some say competition is the key to success but not everything in life have to be about competition, but competition is what sells.
Because even the same television companies compete to reach the top. The image of these shows in the minds of kids like the X Factor, survivor, and the apprentice and many more, the kids may think that it’s cool to go on one of these shows and get rich just by singing or jumping off a cliff, eating worms, bugs, politics and even going days without a shower, thinking they could walk out of that show with a container of money without even trying to attend college and obtain a education is not acceptable for anyone with the obsolescence to that mind set. Reality television also expose certain messages, that the solution to success is image relatively more than our ability. I oppose that because if a person know that they could win with their voice on a show like the X Factor, but because you are not that beautiful enough or attractive even if they have the talent to compete and off the street, meaning homeless you should still have a strong chance of winning the competition because of the image factor.
In conclusion reality Television has more unsound information, we should know that education comes first not trying to acquire riches from these shows, not brainwash by these shows education may give you that American dream.
Hello Sophia. I am a student in Dr. X’s class and I was asked to give you feedback on your revision of CAT 1.
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I think your claim/thesis is very clear because I like the points about the shows.
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your reasons connect to the topic well and are easy to understand. One reason I liked that you show how competition affect our day to day life.
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your evidence was solid but general, as for example when you write about way you talked about the show "flavor of love" , I wish that you give more details about what the girls had to do to win this man heart or fame
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the whole was easy to read. Good job!
Hello! I am a student in Dr. X class and I was asked to give you a feedback on revision of cat one
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Good job on your claim/thesis it was very clear and it gave me an idea in what your essay was going to be.
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Your reasons connected to the topic well and easy to understand and I like how you gave your own personal experience
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Your evidence was solid but general for example how you wrote about the show the X factor and you really expressing yourself.
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You stared up really good on your CAT I just want for you to expand more your conclusion and just re- read your essay but other than that you have no problem in passing the CAT TEST!! GOOD LUCK – RedMango-
I have to say, Kwamsta, I am not quite sure what your claim is in this response. Also, I cannot tell very well what is summary and what is your own view.
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