Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Kwamie

1)      I learn that annotations help you with critical way of thinking about what you are about to write and agree and disagree with different points to make an argument with what you are reading.

2)       Sheering ideas , thinking ,  focusing on different facts and talking about it, it’s like when the writer said: WHEN WE USE OWER COMPUTERS AND CELL PHONS ALL THE TIME WE’RE ALWAYS DISTRACTED,  yes we are most of the time on a day to day basis but as for me I will sometimes drop everything for some quiet.

3)      By reading and annotating helps you understand for your future writing and responding in your own words and summarizing,

4)      Annotating will make you a better writer because it will make you focus on that goal to get the paper done also putting the sum of everything in your own words.

Monday, September 12, 2011

blog 1

In my essay, I will explain some toxic and mental pollutants that humans face on a day to day life and of even simply sitting on your soffer watching the television.
With the growth in mass production in food, cloths, cars, you name it we see it , our minds are forever seeing and focusing on adds. From the time you exit the house on your way to work you see adds on the train busses now even cars, with people trying to promote their own marketing goals, so your work is done and you are home watching the football game, but for each break there is a lot of adds within that time ,just to show the world what you have to offer. Now I don’t have a problem with promoting yourself but it’s too much for the brain to cope with, even at time I will go to the bank and in the process of getting money out the machine there goes an add across the screen, driving up and down the  I-95 you see them everywhere . There is nowhere to run from them   This is the last one I could not cope with, the fact that even in my child’s classroom at her school I see them, I saw a Frosted flakes add there, already stimulating the kid’s minds so that when my kid come home or when we are in the supermarket se will point the right one she saw in her class. Yes it’s all about the money, but I think it should be at a minimum